Saturday, November 17, 2012

Journal #17- Sensory Writing



As the light blue fuzz feathered through the warm current of air purring from the heating vent, I envisioned a comfy summer morning.  Very different from the frigid temperatures and wet snow that the months of February always seem to bring.  In my class-time daydream, I pictured a warm morning sunshine breaking through the clouds to introduce a new day to the in world.  The sound of birds chirping and chipmunks squeaking only added to the feel of a spectacular day.  I recognized the sound of a fresh wind off of the lake found in our back yard; the sound of leaves rustling in that wind, and our neighbor's dog barking.  As I stood up from my imagined nap on the deck, a caught a whiff of the smell of fresh cut grass that I had mowed the day before.  The feel of the deck under my bare feet and the warmth from the sun reminded me of the cookies my mom said she was making today.  I entered my house and smelled the freshly baked cookies.  They almost smelled as good as they taste.  I snatched one off of the grey baking pan and took a bite out of the still warm cookie.  The chocolate chips just added to the sweet taste, and I thought I could live off of these cookies forever.  I savored the flavor in my mouth and told myself again that it was a great day.  Then all of a sudden I was jolted from this relaxing dream.  Back in the frigid classroom, the ear-racking bell had just rung to wake me up.  The bustling movement all around me signaled that school was dismissed for the day.  As I got up and walked into the hallway, the smell of body odor and too much cologne caught me by surprise.  Another festive day at school was over, and it was time to head out into the windy and chilly outdoors.  

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